I really liked the instruments, they were executed without flaw! The intro blew me away, and kept that way throughout the song.
But I'll be honest, the vocals were not really that good. It makes me imagine a D&D fan trying to sing along to his favourite Metallica song while fighting a necromancer, or just JonTron trying to sing metal. But credit where it's due, those lower vocals were awesome, and I would have loved it if they were utilized for the whole song.
For vocals, I think for the best way to make the voice better, it would help to either use a Reverb/Echo, to try and either change the pitch of the voice or put more notes on different octaves, and to utilize the ability of putting different intensities into the voice, like some parts could be sharp without a bass boost, and yelling with a huge bass boosted tone.
But keeping rocking dude, those riffs are great!
Awesome feedback, buddy! I will do more Reverb/Echo and PitchShifting as the time goes by! That interaction was awesome, and if you entered in a D&D world, my mission was succeeded! You sure have to check out Rhapsody's music, they are superb!
Have an awesome week and stay heavy and awesome! \m/, ^-^ ,\m/